Thursday, 4 February 2010

Evaluation

In this evaluation I will be discussing the ways in which my media product uses, develops and challenges the forms and conventions of existing media products. As well as establishing how my media product represents particular social groups and what kind of institution might distribute it. I will also be discussing who the audience are and how I attracted and addressed them. I will also include my own personal learning experiences from the process of construction and what I have learnt in the progression from my pre-liminary task to the main task.

Developing and Challenging Forms and Coventions
Let us begin with evaluating the three media texts and I will discuss ways in which I’ve used, developed and challenged forms and conventions.


The front cover of FRANK uses simple conventions such as a masthead, sell lines, a banner, a puff and an image. FRANK follows the conventions of an existing music magazine of its kind, for example, the music magazine NME, because they both focus on Indie/ Alternative music. It includes a feisty and edgy image of an artist, who is dressed in a leather jacket, which is an item of clothing which is often associated with Indie music. The sell-lines follow the conventions of existing publications as they are short and witty; they avoid going into too much detail in their description, for example, like a Lifestyle magazine would. Alliteration is used for one of the sell-lines, "Gigs, Groupies and Electric Glockenspiels" because it provides the sell line with a catchy and quirky tone.

However, the front cover also challenges the conventions of music magazines in its portrayal of women. FRANK reinforces a positive representation of the modern woman; the majority of existing music publications, in my opinion, re-enforce a negative representation. When a female is featured in a music magazine, they usually fall into one of the four categories of female stereotypes. These stereotypes include the 'Girly-Girl', the 'Sex Object', the 'De-feminised Artist' and the 'Basic Fan'. These stereotypes were established in a previous post. The image on the front cover of FRANK is of a female artist whose body language and facial expression successfully establishes her confidence and feisty attitude. This type of expression would fall into the likes of the 'De-feminised artist' category, as the language and expressions displayed may be considered quite mannish. Yet, the artist on the front cover of FRANK maintains femininity with her mid-length curly hair, pieces of eccentric jewellery and tight-fitted leather jacket. Juxposition is used between key elements of the image, such as body language, facial expression and costume, which prevents it from falling into one specific category. The front cover of FRANK inverts and challenges the conventions, as it features a female artist on the front cover without representing or expressing her in a degrading, sexist or stereotypical fashion.

The contents page uses conventions such as a title, text and an image. I also thought it would be an interesting attribute to feature an Editors Letter, which maintained an element of femininity. The use of an editors letter appears to be commonly used in lifestyle and fashion magazines, yet few music publications include them too, e.g. ‘Kerrang!’ and ‘NME’. It is also situated to the left side of the page which is where they would typically be placed. The contents pages of other existing music magazines vary in the style of how much content they actually show. For example, the music magazine Vibe highlights the main features of the issue and the page references; NME list the page numbers according to the bands that are featured on those pages. Other publications list the entire content of the magazine, along with page numbers and captions. I chose to highlight the four main features of the magazine to emphasise their importance and to give the page a fresh and de-cluttered look. However, some aspects of the contents page invert conventions, as the text including the title ‘features’ and the page numbers have been placed directly on top of the image, using the whiteness of the artists’ t-shirt as a background. This clever and quirky transaction reflected the style and content of the magazine.




The double page spread (DPS) of FRANK follows conventions by including a title, a title caption, an article, a pull quote, gutters between paragraphs, an image and image caption. There is use of brand identity of the three pieces as layout and style, colour and font is repeated. This makes the product more realistic and recognisable. There is consistency of the colour grey, as it is featured on the background of the masthead which is used on both the front cover and on the contents page. It is also used as a background colour for the double page spread.
Originally, the masthead featured black font on top of a red background. I chose to use red as it is a commonly used colour within music publications and the style of the masthead was inspired by the magazine SPIN. On the mock-up, the decision to use this particular colour appeared successful. However, when creating the final pieces on Photoshop, I discovered that in reality, this particular colour, however convenient and traditional, did not achieve the main aim of the magazine. Using the colour red made the front cover appear too masculine, which defeated the purpose of FRANK.

Representation of Social Groups

Gender
My media product re-enforces a positive representation of modern women, as strong, independent, feisty females with a passion for British Indie music. This representation is uncommon in the music magazine industry. There is currently a system of inequality, where female artists only ever appear in music magazines if they have been either masculinised or sexualised.

For example:

RnB music magazine, VIBE, features semi naked artists striking provocative poses. I personally find this concept of selling magazines through sex and exploiting young women as absolute carnage. This is why I have created a magazine that challenges the conventions.

If women are not selling magazines through exposing themselves, they de-feminising themselves in order to be acknowledged and taken seriously in the magazine music industry.


However, my media product breaks these conventions and represents the artist as themselves. Frank magazine differs from other music publications as it does not represent women in a degrading and demeaning light.

Race, Class and Youth
The artists I have used to feature on my media products represent white, upper working class teenagers. The social group represented here could be referred to as ‘rock chicks’ and ‘indie kids’.

‘Rock chick’

‘Indie kid'

A combination of style:

The representation of these specific social groups is typical for a magazine that focuses on Indie rock music. This is evident as associations with these subcultures have been used within my media texts.


Media Institutions
I have researched the Media institution that could potentially distribute my magazine.
I would consider using IPC Media to publish FRANK magazine as they are one of the leading media institutions in the UK; being a well established company also means more advertisement options, making it inexpensive and more efficient to advertise with a reputable institution.

They have mass market women’s division called (IPC Connect) which comprises women’s weekly magazines such as Look and Now. They also have upmarket women’s divisions called (IPC Southbank) where they comprise luxury fashion brands such as Marie Claire and In Style. The men’s portfolio (IPC Inspire) consists of music magazine NME. This is the perfect institution to distribute my magazine as they produce publications that my target audience are likely to read.

IPC Southbank advertisement:

“The portfolio bristles with high quality imagery and high quality editorial – Fashion and Beauty trends and advice, home styling, celebrity, environment, education, business and real world news”

“Delivered to our readers through glossy magazines and exiting websites”

Here is a link to the website:

The Target Audience

Browsing old record stores, sitting in starbucks, discussing last weeks Gossip Girl over a Frappachino.
‘Frank’ is targeted at a female audience aged 16-19; young girls who are currently studying in sixth form, college or university. They are creative and ambitious girls and are most likely to be studying Music, Art and other such creative subjects. They are likely to be involved in casual relationships or are part of the ‘dating scene’. It is likely that they play instruments themselves or sing and write songs in a band. These girls are creative, artistic, quirky and fun and they just need that extra boost of confidence in order to truly express these traits to the world. They are well grounded, reflective and reserved individuals who enjoy time to themselves; to listen to music, to write songs or write in their journals, play an instrument, to sing, read poetry, novels, and magazines or to paint. They are popular and admired by their friends and family for their talent and style. Their style is eccentric and chic; they may like to customize garments of clothing to make them truly unique. They are passionate about music and are also interested in fashion as they are both arts that express individuality. Their philosophy is to ‘never follow the crowd’ and to always be themselves. They shop in high street stores such as Topshop, H&M, Zara and Urban Outfitters whilst also shopping in vintage boutiques to find one-off distinctive pieces. These girls wear their hair long, naturally tousled and backcombed, because it’s all about the volume!

They like to visit art galleries, museums on history and culture, whilst also enjoying trips to the theatre to watch plays and musicals. They are committed gig goers and festival attendees. On weekends they like to party and go shopping in central London. They also enjoy browsing music stores for old records or new album releases and hanging out with friends at Starbucks discussing last week’s Gossip Girl over a frappachino. They are interested in photography and are constantly taking snaps of themselves and friends, cityscapes and still life compositions. Hobbies may include singing practise or ‘jam sessions’ with the band. They are interested in social networking and are constantly updating their Facebook and Twitter pages on their Blackberry’s and iPhone’s. They are interested in fashion-blogging and downloading music. They are heavily involved with all aspects of the music scene by listening to underground, contemporary and artists from previous eras. Their iPods are filled with bands and artists that fall into the Alternative, Indie, Pop, Rock and Acoustic genres. For example, Florence + the Machine, Laura Marling, La Roux, Bat For Lashes, Feist, Ellie Goulding, Goldfrapp etc. Music plays a major part in the lives of ‘Frank’s readers. They use music to express their emotions. They are constantly searching for new bands to listen to or to see live; their iPods are jam packed with thousands of songs. Music inspires the way they dress, the way they act, speak and present themselves, the people they surround themselves with and the perspective they have of life and of themselves as individuals. Frank magazine is suitable for my target audience as it covers all areas of key interest. My media product features everything from interviews with the TA's favourite artists to information on the latest bands, gigs and festival line-ups to concert reviews. Everything the TA needs to satisfy their musical desires, Frank magazine has it!

Audience Attraction
After I completed my media product, I created a Post-production questionnaire, asking members of my TA what they thought about my magazine. Listed below are examples of the questions asked accompanied by feedback. I have pulled quotes from those I questioned; I have selected quotes that sum up the entire opinion of my target audience.

Front Cover:
1) Would you say this front cover establishes the fact that it is a Indie/ Alternative rock magazine?

"Yes. It is clear with the use of colours such as grey, red and black. These are colours that are typically seen on the front of a music magazine."

"Just by looking at the model a reader has a clear indication of the magazines genre. What with her dark hair and thick black eye make-up and leather jacket."

2) Walking into your local newsagents or supermarket and seeing the new magazine on the shelves, would you feel obliged to pick it up and read it? Please state reasons for your answer.

"I would pick it up and read it, as the layout appears to contain similiar aspects of a magazine like NME, which I usually read. I'd choose to read this because it looks like a female version of NME."

"Yes. Because it is different from other magazines you'd see on the shelf, such as Womens fashion & lifestyle, lad's mags, mens music mags. It's original because you never see copies of music magazines that are aimed at women in the shops."

3) Do you think this piece looks professional or amatuerish?

"I think certain parts of the front cover look proffessional, such as the sell lines. The sizing, colouring and placement on the front cover makes the piece look realistic."

"I would say there's a mixture of professional and amatuerish qualities about this piece. The layout and organisation of the front cover matches the conventions of existing magazines, yet perhaps the photograph looks a little amatuerish."

4) Which sell lines appeal to you the most?

"The sell line about the best dressed musicians of the week, is the sell line that appeals to me the most, because it integrates my main interest of music with another interest of mine.. fashion!"

Contents Page:
1) Do you think this contents page is successful? Please state its strengths and weaknesses:

"I do think this page is successful. It looks exactly like a contents page should, yet it is one with a quirky edge. The strong points of the piece are the image, and the sell lines. As the image fits in perfectly with the text. The catchy, quirky sell lines are also very well written. The only weakness I recognised is that there could have been more colour."

2)Which page appeals to you the most and why?

"For me, it would have to be the page that focuses on KaytieKat's article! I can't wait to see if she is as catty as we believe.."

"I'd turn to page 6 to read to countdown of the top fifty female artists. It spreads a sense of female pride and is perfect for the first issue of a music magazine aimed at women."

Double Page Spread:
1) What do you think about the layout and organisation of the double page spread?

"It adopts a similiar layout to other music magazines and has been organised in a tidy, simplistic and elegent fashion. I like the use of colour too."

"A classic and stylish layout with a kick of fiesty hot pink. I love it!"

2) Do you think the article itself contained a proffessional or amatuerish quality? Do you think It was successful?

"I enjoyed the layout of the article and I found it entertaining to read. KaytieKat is quite the inspiration! I do think the way in which the article was written was successful."

"The article was good, although I didn't really appreciate the layout. As it appeared a little messy with no distinction between the questions and answers."

3) Do you think the models used were appropriate and suited the style of the magazine?

"I do. I think both the female and male artist chosen to feature in the three pieces of FRANK, really suited the concept of the magazine and reflected the genre of music with their funky, rocky style."

"The models used suited the criteria and the style of the magazine was well estbalished through the costume, make-up and poses of the models. Although, perhaps a few more images of other models would have made the product more successful."

Reflection
What I have learnt...
Since starting the main task and throughout the construction of this product I have developed quite a few technological skills. I have become more recognisable with my camera. I am now able to play around with the focus, the light settings and the angles to capture the exact style of photograph I want. I also have developed my Adobe Photoshop skills and I am now able to edit images without difficulty or confusion. I have become more familiar with the world of blogging. An interest of my own is to read fashion blogs and to be the actual producer of a blog has taught me that it is not as easy as it looks! I have learnt that it can be a long and tedious process and I now appreciate the effort and hard work bloggers put into their blogs. I now know how to set up a blog and upload images and documents onto it, customise the style and how to upload posts.

Since starting the main task and throughout the construction of this product I have developed quite a few technological skills. I have become more recognisable with my camera. I am now able to play around with the focus, the light settings and the angles to capture the exact style of photograph I want. I also have developed my Adobe Photoshop skills and I am now able to edit images without difficulty or confusion. I have become more familiar with the world of blogging. An interest of my own is to read fashion blogs and to be the actual producer of a blog has taught me that it is not as easy as it looks! I have learnt that it can be a long and tedious process and I now appreciate the effort and hard work bloggers put into their blogs. I now know how to set up a blog and upload images and documents onto it, customise the style and post.


Looking back at my preliminary task and having finished the main task. I have come to realise that my technological skills have expanded greatly. I am now better knowledge in areas such as functioning digital camera, editing images via Adobe Photoshop and creating blogs. I have also become more recognisable and familiar with the topic of magazines as I am more aware of the process in which it takes to plan a front cover, a contents page and a double page spread article. I have learnt that every single aspect applied to these pieces is there for a reason and has a function to perform. I believe the layout, organisation, the images and texts of the main task are much more successful and conventional to that of the preliminary task. Over all, I have learnt that the process of creating pages for a magazine is a lot harder than one may think. I have tried my absolute hardest to create a media product that conveys to the conventions, but which also stands out as unique and original and hopefully I have successfully achieved just that.

Final Pieces




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Monday, 14 December 2009

Mock-Ups





Practise Shots

Front Cover









Contents Page







Double Page Spread









Double Page Spread

This is an example of a double page spread from NME magazine. I would like to use a similiar layout.






Contents Page Text Suggestions

Images
I intend to have one main image of a male artist on the contents page. The image will be a medium shot of the male wearing a pair of headphones. The header and body copy will be placed over the image. The masthead and the word 'Contents' will be placed in the top centre of the page. The Editors Letter will be placed on the left hand side. Including an Editors Letter is a personal and intimate attribute that a female target audience would appreciate and find endearing. The features will be placed in the bottom right hand corner.

The main image:
The male artist stands facing the camera, with wildly curly hair, wearing a big pair of black headphones. The wire of the headphone is in his mouth. This image represents the production of music, the wire is plugged into the persons mouth and the person represents the music generator, the creator. The music travels through the headphones, which indicates the reality of the musical production. This links in with the article being set inside the recording studio - which is where albums are produced!

The Artist
The name of the male artist is "The Bedlam". The definition of the word 'Bedlam' is 'Chaotic situation'. This links in with the fact that this is a music magazine and it relates to the mise-en-scene of the image and the type of music the artist creates - which is synth-pop. I have chosen to use a male artist on the contents page to show readers that even though this is a magazine that focused on women, it still includes male artists and bands.

The Editors letter
In the Editors Letter I would first like to welcome the readers to the magazine, state what it aims to achieve, state what is inside the magazine and then thank the readers for buying it. Here is what the editors letter will say:

Hey! Readers, welcome to the first issue of FRANK magazine! Here at FRANK, we aim to update our indie girls with everything fresh on the alternative music scene. In this issue, we have an exclusive interview with 'KaytieKat'! A special feature of the Top 20 Female Artists to look out for in 2010! We pop into the studio with 'The Bedlam' and we also track down the style-trends of week in the world of music, can your music icons dress aswell as they perform? There's only one way to find out! Thank you for buying the first issue of FRANK, let this be the beginning of a beautiful magazine relationship! From Jess x

Features
The features will be situated in the right hand corner and will be layed out like this:

Page 17 - IT'S ALL ABOUT THE VOLUME.
We talk to the synth pop artist that is 'The Bedlam', about gigs, groupies and electric glockenspiels.

The title: 'it's all about the volume', is a reference to the image of the artist.  The big headphones link in with the idea of loud music and reflect the meaning of the artist's name successfully. This feature description is about an artist called 'The Bedlam' who creates synth pop tunes. Frank magazine joins him in studio creating his debut album. The interview consists of the artist talking about the thrill of playing gigs and his embarrassing experiences with female fans. 'Electric Glockenspiel' is apart of the sell line to create an alliteration, and because it is relevant in relation to the music he creates, as electric glockenspiels are used to create synth pop music!

Page 6 - Top 20 Female Artists of 2010
Frank supplies you ladies with a countdown of female artists that you NEED to have on your Ipods ASAP!

In this description the TA is established with the use of direct addressing and reference to modern technology. It also relates to their main interest: music! The word 'NEED' is in captial letters and indicates the urge for new music. It uses language that the TA would use such as 'ASAP'.

Page 20 - KAYTIEKAT
Is she as "catty" as we're lead on to believe? Or simply just a modern woman with an opinion, we dish out the dirt over tea and cigarettes.

The use of a rhetorical question makes the readers feel involved as they are being addressed directly. The 'cat' references link in with the name of the artist and the image the media portrays.

Page 28 - Best Dressed Musicians of the week.
Florence in florals, Pixie Lott in hot-pants and Marina.. err, wrapped in the USA Flag? See which of our indie girls makes the best dressed spot this week!

Iconography is established by referring to the styles of artists. Florence Welch from Florence and the Machine is known for her use of flowers within her clothing and on set of her performances and the same can be said for singer Pixie Lott who is known for prancing around on and off stage in hot pants! These artists are recognised through music and their sense of style. The magazine refers to artists by their first names because it speaks the same language as the reader, who would also use abreviations for bands & duos and refer to solo artists by their first names. The magazine does this because it knows the TA will know who they are referring to.
"Marina... err, wrapped in the USA Flag?" is about Marina Diamondis aka Marina & the Diamonds, and is a reference to her latest release, where in the music video she is wrapped in the flag of the USA. The TA would understand as they watch music videos and would be a fan of her.






Top: Florence & the Machine,
Middle: Pixie Lott
Bottom: Marina & the Diamonds


Front Cover Texts

The first issue of FRANK magazine will feature a female alternative/ indie artist on the front cover. I have already considered the style of the artist, their costume, hair and make-up and the locations and mise-en-scene. Now it is time to give the artist a name, to decide on the main sell line, and the other sell lines that will feature on the front cover as well as conventions that will be used.



Naming the Artist
I have decided to call my artist 'KaytieKat'.
Why?
Well...



-For a musician to have a stage name that involves their own name accompanied by the name of an animal, the stage name is given an air of wildness and unruliness. This shows the style of the artist as a performer, providing them with a fierce and feisty exterior and association.



-The association with cats: Cats are elegantly-moving and mysterious creatures; these are qualities that I would like my artist to embody and express through the images and content of the article.



-There is a link to cat-like behaviour. My Artist is a feisty female who will defend her domain, which may lead to cat fights with certain musicians in the industry. This also links in with the ethoses of FRANK magazine, as it focuses on the modern woman, being able to defend herself and voice her opinion, whilst still maintaining a degree of elegance and mystery... just like a cat!



The Main Sell Line
Next to the image of the artist, it will say “KaytieKat” The sell-line description will say “We talk to Kaytie over tea & cigarettes. The klaws are out!”. This sell line establishes that the main feature of the first issue is about this artist and that FRANK magazine has interviewed her over ‘tea & cigarettes’. These are two items which relate in terms of class and reflect the reality of British culture. The idea of ‘Klaws’ being out, refers to the artist’s feistiness and ‘catty’ behaviour on the music scene, e.g. arguing with opposing bands and musicians! Frank intends to find out who the real Kaytie is, whether the rumours are true. Is she just another rock’n’roll wild child OR that is she simply just a confident, outspoken, strong-minded and opinionated woman? Considering FRANKS admiration of wise, powerful and elegant women, maybe the public has received the wrong impression of KaytieKat and FRANK’s intends to change that.



The Sell lines
I want to avoid the cluttered look by using only three sell lines on the page. These will include:



-“Female artists to look out for in 2010”



FRANK is a magazine that focuses on the talent and success of female artists, so in the first issue they dedicate a feature to introducing fans to new bands and artists, whilst immediately informing the TA that this a female orientated magazine.



-“Gigs, Groupies & Electric Glockenspiels”
This artist is an up and coming male synth-pop artist working on his debut album. FRANK talks to him about his rising success, the thrill of playing gigs and his embarrassing experiences with female fans. He also speaks of his love for his electrical glockenspiel. The use of a male artist shows the TA that although the magazine focuses on females, that it does also include male artists and bands.



-“Trend Alert! Best Dressed musicians of the week”
This sell line shows the involvement of an additional interest of the TA: Fashion! Showing the best dressed artists further promotes the idea of this being a music magazine aimed at females.



Other
-I intend to include a puff on the front cover that will read “FREE DOWNLOAD: ELLIE GOULDING & MARINA AND THE DIAMONDS ”
The style of the artists used in the puff, expresses the kind of artists the TA listen to, confirming the publication as female targeted.



-I intend on using a thin banner along the bottom of the front cover listing the artists featured in this issue. For example: “Mumford & Sons/ Laura Marling/ First Aid Kit/ Grizzly Bear/ Passion Pit/ Temper Trap/ Bat For Lashes"
These chosen artists reflect the style of the magazine.